How to Comment on a Session of Papers

 

You have been assigned to comment on a session of papers at a historical conference. Now what? Here’s how to fill your role in a way that serves the profession and reflects creditably on you.

 

General Role of the Commentator

 

The commentator (sometimes called the discussant) is a role player. The moderator (or chair) of the session is the convener, facilitator, and genial host. The presenters (or readers) are the focus. As commentator, you have a limited but valuable part to play, which comprises three elements.

 

1.      Appraising each of the papers

2.      Relating them to one another

3.      Making sense of the session as a whole

 

The second two elements may be more or less attainable, depending on the coherence of the session. Some sessions are nicely wrapped, comprising papers that fit together easily. Others are combinations of convenience; in such cases, don’t reach too far for connections.

 

Specifications and Tips

 

The following specs and tips are the product of long experience. These things work, and result in a better experience for all participants.

 

Greetings, Clarence! I look forward to reading your paper and participating with you in our session at the upcoming Northern Great Plains History Conference. I’m writing just to provide you with my current contact information—this e-mail address, and the following postal address. . . .

1.      Be respectfully persistent about securing papers from the authors. Well before the conference, perhaps six weeks, write an e-mail to each author (with copy to the moderator). In this message just greet the author genially, say you look forward to participating in the session, and provide current contact information for yourself. Providing current e-mail and postal address should be the point of the message. See sample text at right.

 

2.      If you haven’t received a paper by two weeks before the conference, then write the moderator a calm note saying you haven’t received the paper. At about that time, too, you should send the moderator enough information, abstracted from your vita, to use in introducing you at the session. This might be a paragraph biography, or a half-page or so of items from your vita.

 

Although, unfortunately, I didn’t receive Mr. Jackson’s paper in time to prepare comments on it, and thus will not presume to appraise the paper, still I can see how it fits with the other papers in the session, in this respect. . . .

3.      If you don’t receive a paper in time to review it, don’t sweat it. This happens. Work with what you have. When you deliver your commentary, you can wing it enough to fill the gap. You can comment on how the late paper fits with the others or adds value to the session. See sample construction at right.

 

4.      Read the papers carefully and mark them up preparatory to writing your commentary. Don’t worry about matters of style or minor problems. Stay in the realm of ideas.

 

5.      Write out your comments verbatim. The paper presenters have prepared polished texts, and you should do the same. Plus, a prepared text keeps you honest as to time constraints. Your commentary should be no longer than ten minutes, preferably eight.

 

6.      Write to the audience, not to the authors. A common mistake is for a commentator to present the authors with questions or challenges. This results in a two-way exchange that eats up the available time and leaves out the audience. Your comments should help the audience digest the papers and pique interest in them, so that the audience will want to talk about them.

 

7.      Assume a posture and tone that encourage scholarship and collegiality. Don’t try to score points, play politics, or elevate yourself. Constructive criticism is always appropriate; rhetorical indirections help keep things from getting personal.

 

8.      An anecdote or a touch of humor can be good for the tenor of the session. Don’t get carried away. One such morsel is enough.

 

There is a useful formula that will help jumpstart your composition of comments and ensure you do what is needed. The table below outlines the formula.

 

Introductory Paragraph

Quickly state the topic of the session as well as the papers and their authors. Close the paragraph with the statement of a theme for your commentary.

Pulling Things Together

Point out the ideas, subjects, methods, or other commonalities that connect the papers and make the session coherent.

Appraisal of Each Paper

Summarize the paper in a paragraph of a few sentences.

Draw attention to the strengths of the paper, which may include the extent and nature of the sources; the handling of the material; the effectiveness in supporting the thesis; and the significance of the findings.

Deal with any salient shortcomings as opportunities for improvement of the piece.

Conclude the treatment of each paper with an appraisal of the contribution it makes to the session and to the field.

Value Added

Thank all appropriate parties (the presenters, perhaps the person who put the session together). Go on to say why the session was worthwhile—such as what you learned, the potential contribution to the field, the opportunities presented for a good discussion. This closing statement should follow through on the theme you stated in the first paragraph.

 

The Wizard / Tom Isern